June 14th, 2012, 4:44 pm

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AndToBeLoved June 14th, 2012, 4:55 pm

I like the artwork so far, but the lettering needs a bit more attention. In panel 2, it's not very clear which balloon comes first until after you read it. And in panel 3, the second balloon has too much hair flowing into it and is covering up words, which you have to be careful of. Either way, looking forward to seeing more!

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General Paddle June 14th, 2012, 5:00 pm

lovely colours are lovely
+1 fan